Another example of the stupidity that is the usual reader: This has two readers, God only knows how many hits, and it's probably the most brilliant story I've ever read on here.

I came away from it feeling almost high myself. Like the fragmented thoughts, the apathy, and the total...iuno, everything. Maybe I'm putting too much into it, maybe it's just a stylistic piece to you. But I love it. I think it's brilliant.

This was great - you have a really distinct writing style.

I like that it was choppy and fragmented with a touch of randomness. But it all flowed together.

Anyway, I'm going to scuttle off and read some of your other stuff now.

'little guys living on the trees in your lungs'

that bit is excellent. i really like the style of this, the guy just sounds so stoned, but you manage to do that without just making it too scatty and difficult. . . . very well done!