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Ravensbleeding
2007-08-03
ch 1,
Aww...it's so sweet. It's beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Yep. Favorites, here it comes.
qblisa
2007-07-19
ch 1,
That was sweet. Anyone would be happy to receive a gift like this (esp. something that you have obviously put a lot of time and effort into). Good job.
Lisa
writingxonxwalls
2007-07-17
ch 1,
Oh very swell. It was good, very good. It sounds very mature and it was touching... glad I know who it's about right cuz?? lol love you and good writing...
Briee
The Jynx of Kari
2007-06-23
ch 1,
Aww. This is a sweet poem. I don't think that there's no typos or errors. The poems aptly named with the five senses questioned and the sweetness of their togetherness implied. You know what would help, to italicise the girl's answers or the guys questions. It might be easier to read.

Good job,
__Kari
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