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| Her Wishing Well 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, again. I like the way you repeat the idea of violence and a world ending type theme. 'the sky falls down' 'armageddon. An amazing and powerfull poem. |
| Tytherpol 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abusei like the poem. |
| hey maria 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI like the way the first line is continued with the second-to-last. And I love the last line, it's a perfect summary of the feelings in this poem. |
| Nina Bruja 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abusethese are all the things i would like to say but i get cottonmouth when i think of them. this is perfect. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abusewow, great poem. The imagery and words used are awesome and make the poem so. . . wow lol. I especially love the last line, just because it ties it all together very nicely. Keep it up! Faith |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseamazing. all of your work is so intense. the way you write brings your readers in, hook, line, and sinker. |
| dollface and her cancer 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuse"i want to suck bullets from between your teeth", paired with the not-quite-ending, "i bite down on the bullets between your teeth, they spark", is **-worthy all on its own. my other favorite line being, "my jeans are too thick." god, i'm glad you're writing again. |