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Her Wishing Well
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abuseWow, again. I like the way you repeat the idea of violence and a world ending type theme. 'the sky falls down' 'armageddon. An amazing and powerfull poem.
Tytherpol
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abusei like the poem.
hey maria
2007-06-24
ch 1,
abuseI like the way the first line is continued with the second-to-last.

And I love the last line, it's a perfect summary of the feelings in this poem.
Nina Bruja
2007-06-24
ch 1,
abusethese are all the things i would like to say but i get cottonmouth when i think of them. this is perfect.
Faith Adeline
2007-06-23
ch 1,
abusewow, great poem. The imagery and words used are awesome and make the poem so. . . wow lol. I especially love the last line, just because it ties it all together very nicely. Keep it up!
Faith
amillionlittlepieces
2007-06-23
ch 1,
abuseamazing.
all of your work is so intense.
the way you write brings your readers in,
hook, line, and sinker.
dollface and her cancer
2007-06-23
ch 1,
abuse"i want to suck bullets from between your teeth", paired with the not-quite-ending, "i bite down on the bullets between your teeth, they spark", is **-worthy all on its own. my other favorite line being, "my jeans are too thick." god, i'm glad you're writing again.
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