It's good, I'm just wondering how she got her kid back...

you're a very good writer. youre good with images and whatnot. the only thing i had a problem with was when the mother called the cops and you stop abruptly. i think maybe it would be better if you put more descriptions of that because it is important. like i want to know what happened to the kid [i know i can figure it out, but still], who took the car, when they got caught.


great job!