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PadfootDavis 2007-06-24 . chapter 1
That was completley hilarious. I got a few good laughs out of it...Hehe, I Loved:

Wilma: Good, cause’ I've got to tell you something. My husband Fred Flintstone killed Barney Rubble; Barney stole his Fruity Pebbles so he killed him with his club. Oh my gosh,, if he finds out I told you, he’ll kill me!

Clue: And he did...

I laughed right there. And a lot of other places. What I'm trying to say is GOOD JOB!

+Faves
Always Being Different 2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Very hilarious. I loved the cereal mascot humor. They so deserved to be mocked and you did a great job at it. I would've loved to see this performed. There were some jokes there that I found to be a bit distasteful, such as portraying Lucky as a drunk, but that's just a personal thing. Other than that, it was great.
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