This was just so incredibly tragic. I love how you've written the story in such a way that the reader is unable to hate even the even the supposed 'bad guy'. The way you set the scene for the entire story from start to finish is really well done, creating a sense of being present right there with the characters, of seeing, hearing and feeling whatever they're experiencing. Beautifully written.

I'm shocked that this doesn't have more reviews. It is a unique story and one of the best O have read.

This story is so diabolical. I love it. But everyone is so damaged. Anastasia's this model rape victim. Ciaran was abused by his brother and jailmates. And Lennox was a sex slave. Crazy. Then with all the irony of the whole plot revolving around an alleged hatred of rentboys. ridiculous stuff.

anyways, the ending was sharp. you've got good, easy dialogue. and a very dry, black sense of humor. loved: Ciaran bore an arrogant grin as he followed Lennox in to the back room. "I like to think so."

liked ciaran the best, seemed the most demented. we throw their body chunks into the Mississippi etc., etc. anyways, chilling tone and creepy tale. hope to see more stories in the future.

Great job and wonderful writing skills.

amazing.i think i like this more than "mascara¶noia" already.i definitely feel a sense of dread for carl&what's coming to him.the set up is suspenseful&keeps you wondering...i didn't really notice any spelling/grammar mistakes but i don't look for those really unless they're just blatantly out in the open.so,this review is kind of cheap but i just woke up lol but i really enjoy it-it's going on my favorites.update soon,
david