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| Nicole 2008-07-08 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, I was wondering if you had the rest of this story? I'd really like to read it. If you don't, that's ok. |
| A.Painful.Smile. 2008-03-19 ch 6,  | abuseUm hi, I was wondering if I would be able to read the rest of your story, please. Well anyway my e-mail as you said is Thanks anyway. Oh by the way, love the story, its really good so far and Im really into it. Alright I getting off now, later. |
| wolfzero13 2008-03-11 ch 6, | abuseloved it sucks that its not going to posted here anymore though. |
| IAMySelf 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseHey, I am very interested in this story. So.. If you don't mind, here is my e-mail, thank you very much. |
| Rogue Roxness 2007-10-21 ch 6, | abuseHello! ^^ I really enjoyed reading this story so far, and I'd very much like to read the rest of it. Would you be kind enough to send it to me? I also wanted to say that the plot of this story is very well-done. It caught my attention right away. I can't tell if the ghost is Brandon (which is what I thought at first) or some other child that the horrible man (I forget his name already) killed, but... wow. Please send me the rest! Much love, Rogue |
| Monzi Oni 2007-08-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseI'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. you have a good eye for suspense and emotions. keep going! |
| And-on-Anonymous 2007-07-13 ch 2, | abuseWow! I haven't found a story I wanted to review for a while! This is very good- very fresh, vrey orginal (SO unusual on this site...) and very skillfully written. Obviously this is a very emotive subject and i think you've dealt with it very sensitively- a lot of the writers on here tend to pick emotive subjects purely for shock value and treat them with the sensitivity of a sledge hammer- it's nice to come across something different. I very much look forward to the next chapter- I can't wait to find out more about them and if her daughter is ok (thought the waiting room bit was especially weell done)- hope you continue to update :) |
| briannathewriter 2007-07-13 ch 2, | abuseWow. This is really good! Honestly, this is a nice bit of writing. I especially enjoyed the second chapter. It did well in connecting the reader to what Sarah and Kim were feeling. I'm really looking forward to reading more in this, so keep writing! |