This is a nice peice. The situation of being trapped (although it isn't explained very much why the character felt trapped in the car XD) is wrapped up nicely with the remark "she doesn't understand me at all" like she doesn't understand why the rain is so nice or why I don't care that it's a thunderstorm

I also like how the character likes the exhilaration of the rain instead of the mundane kind of sleepy feeling I got from stuffy and claustrophobic imagery. Even the character banging their head helps this XD

lol If this made any sense, I'm glad. Because when I write reviews they never make much sense to me C:

i like this. i don't understand it very much, but i like it. shows how far off from sane i really can be at times. oh well. but i like it.