WOW. You are a lovely writer, I can't wait until I get as good as you one day(that's a long way off).

-your not-so-secret-admirer

i really liked how you chose to bold certain words, i think it added emphasis in all the right places. i also loved all the similies you used. they were all so beautiful. my favorite one, i think, was i can't/help but melt away/like vanilla scented/candle wax. lovely imagery in there. nice work on this!