|Reviews for Sixes and Eights Amateur Sweethearts|
| changed.by.an.afterthought 7/13/07 . chapter 1
loved it! how eveyrhting was described i was hanging on veyr word...and the meaning of it was deep until the very end when finally it seemed to leap out...nice job
| fairytale failure 6/24/07 . chapter 1
I loved the line 'kicking her Converse to sprays and showers'
becuase it was so obviously about the beach. In so few words...what an image.
the rest was all right.