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| Rabid Pair of Jeans 2008-05-14 ch 1,  | abuse8DD |
| wake of beauty 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseLove it. |
| absrip 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh this was just really sweet! Loved the sexy computer geek and the twist with him actually knowing Mattie. Very romatic, just what I needed;) Thank you and great writing! |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was a good read...i've never read anything that describes the "geeks"[no offence!]this way...and it was refreshing!:) |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseaw that's so cute! i loved it izzie |
| Empty-Fishbowl 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI Love your story. You really have to either continue or write a follow up. --Charlie |
| LadyFalcone 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseIs this story going to be continued? Please say yes. |
| Kizuna 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good!;) I like the two characters, they're sweet!;) |
| Sinister Slash 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The last few lines are amazing, the last one mad me laugh. It's true. Zeke and Matt are hot together! ^_~ They'll have to have more sex cause they can't really remember the sexing they did the first time. hehe |
| nonaccount 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet and cute. I wish it was more than a one-shot 'cause I wanna know what happens next. Fine! Make me do all the work, 'imagination - get crackin'! I see awkward cuteness in the beginning and then settled sweetness. Gah, are those the only words you know?' I think nerds are sexy so I don't understand why it is a stereotype that nerds are "sexually challenged". Cute opening mini-paragraph describing that. I was only confused about the italics section which after looking at it and figuratively scratching my head, I realized it is an amalgam of previous experiences - I'm not too quick on the uptake. |
| Kyle's Precious Little Girl 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseheh. aw, it's so cute!! good job. great work. and keep it up!! lots of love, -Precious |
| ddz008 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! It was so sweet, I like him. It was good that they sort of ended together at the end and that Matt was the shy one XD |
| gothicHobbit08 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseaw. It's cute. And one-shots make me happy. |
| school-girl crush. 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseOh, this was adorable! I love the didactic ending. "Be-**-utiful." is the most amazing thing I have ever heard. Absolutely brilliant. |
| portabellaprincess 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Short and sweet! :) |