I actually like this.. *-*
i love how it tells her story.. i actually like her if ever she's a real person..

it's what's inside that counts, right? it's really good.. :]

Pish! it so pretty! oh, and for some reason my computer is being stupid and wouldn't let me review on Kellyn. so my comment is: Chow is not Japanese. you might want to consider changing that. other than that, is very good!

I love it! Its simple and beautiful. :)

i think it belongs in the poetry section tho because it sounds like a poem.

I like the part where its talking abt how she's perfect becuase she's not perfect.
and also where she never was "jsut jane" but that she had that beauty inside of her all along...

the tone was so sweet and regretful. :)

I agree with you where you said that it needed to be written :)
Good job!
-Dreamforever101
Ps. oh and if you have time, can you read/review my story on fp called "First Impressions" and offer me feedback or comments??

Nice poem! I really like it. Using Jane and playing with the whole "plain Jane" common misconception is great and universal.

Wow. I love it. Your imagery is gorgeous!

FANTASTIC!

Aww. This is so sweet and sad. Wow. I just love it. Your writing style really shows through in this (not that it doesn't in your stories, but poems always seem to kind of showcase writing, especially longer ones like this). Beautiful.