It looks like a great start! I rally do hope you continue updating this!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

O, I love it! Please, write more. This interests me greatly. I'd like to see their background, and what happened.
Good job, nice and descriptive.

Aah, what now?? Can´t wait for the next chapter! And I like Ray...

Okay this was a leetle confusing but I still get it. Good job on this chap though.

I'm really liking this. I have no clue what is going on, well I do but not the whole picture and I'm hoping you will soon clear things up for us. I like the way it's narrated.

I'm liking this so far. It's good. Can't wait to read more.

Yay, recent update! :D I like this story, even though I'm not quite sure what's going on here...but I can't wait to find out.

extremely interesting. I can't wait to see were it goes. It left me with a lot of "wait? what.. no let him talk.. no don't stop there!" so I really hope you continue this.

Interesting...I love the context of this piece. It's like a story that I had in my head for awhile but couldn't write. You have capture the gist of it thank you. So *coughs* um when are we getting more? Please don't tell me this is like a one hit wonder chapter thingy :(. Chapters are your friend...:) More please I love it.

Oh this is sad, really sad... But I'll still read it and hope that it won't be so sad later on in the fic.

Amazing start! Your stories are so powerfull... you´re amazing. Hope you update soon!

Sita, you are amazing.