The media's view of the "perfect body" isn't very really realistic. I believe helps it cause anorexia and bulimia.

Anyway, great poem.

~Twilight Starr~

i love the way you wrote this. it's bittersweet and vague, but gets a message across. well done, you'll make quite a few people think with this one!

keep on writing! naioka1992 - xoxo

Ah, you speak the truth. Nicely written.

Well Done. Good use of vocabulary and everything. This is just a pet peeve of mine, but I hate the empty spaces for no reason. It's really easy to take out to. Just upload the document itself as a story, and then when saving it as a story, save it as a poem. I really enjoyed this! I remember when I felt like this... But there's always something you can do and I ended up learning it the hard way. Well done and keep up the good work!

I bet so many people could relate to this poem. It was well written, and I love it! Great Job.