good for you anne you deserve to be happy and you are a smart girl... and he was a fool for leavving you alone when you were so young and treated you the way he did

i loved this. it's heartbreaking but beautiful. don't restrict yourself to rhyming if there's something you really really want to say though.

after reading this and the reviews you've recieved for it, i agree with the author 'ElegantRaven' (Sp?) - writing is an art and you most-certainly have a talent for it. keep on writing, Anne!
i hope everything works out for you and you never recieve a hateful word over this. congratulations because you've written a beautiful poem that's really touched people!!

good luck with everything, naioka1992 - xoxo

Good job babe. I'm happy for you and very proud.

Anne,

This is great it really is. But if you need anything you know how to get to me. Your a great friend and your like a sister i could never have and you deserve the best out of life. Thank you for everything you've helped me through. Bye

"I don’t have any talent in an art," writing is an art, and you have a talent for it. Very well done. Very raw. I really enjoyed reading this and I'm very glad to read that you're over it. I don't know what's happened or anything, but by the way you wrote this poem, it was more than cruel. Good luck and I hope life picks up for you!