 Alaizabel Davis 2007-06-29 . chapter 1This is so awesome! It brought tears to my eyes. I like how you ended it the way it began... it was really beautiful. Great work. |
 Razor-Blade-Mckenzie 2007-06-24 . chapter 1This reminds me of my life. my fiance stays out until 4 am. it really hurts that he's never here. |
 Nicola Heartache 2007-06-24 . chapter 1This is such a heartbreaking, memoir-type story. Short but wretchedly sweet. Keep writing! |
 whispered something profound 2007-06-24 . chapter 1oh thats so sad. it made me almost cry.
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