I admire your pride in your size, and your poem wasn't bad at all, but the thing that bothers me about these type of messages is that they put down thinner people as well. I'm a thinner person myself, and I was teased for being thin once. I don't like the idea that can be implied that just because someone is thin, that means they are bulimic. That is all.

great emotion. but in the third part you used the wrong word. it should be throw. i like this a lot though.

yo go jess!

aww, this is so sweet. but it's true. anyone who think you need to be a f&$ing size 0 (i HATE that bloody size) needs a whack in the head. thanks for putting out the right message about that.

keep on writing! naioka1992

Sweet! I love the summary. I couldn't help laughing... but I didn't notice the meaning until I read it.

Not a bad poem. A bit random, but not bad.

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