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what an asshole
im sorry for what happened hun
xx

It was a good story, I am sorry that happened to you that seems to happen a lot now for some odd reason, anyways I loved it.

-Raven

omg, so is it going to work?
will it reverse??
and you got those lyrics from evanescence =]
i love their songs
anywayz, great chapter
keep up the awesome work!

ahh, what happened to her??
and what is adam? a vampire?
and did he bite her or something??
ok, so she likes him, right? does he like her??
update son

the poem isnt so bad
its pretty good
and yay, finally a chapter in adam's p.o.v.
wonder why hes so quiet all the time...

This story is really good, i really like it. i mean it is interesting and also kind of intriguing and i like ayla she is really cool.

I like how it's progressing so far and I'm trying to spot anything supernatural because I'm excited to know what'll happen. ^^ +fav/alert

its pretty good
and that song by linkin park is one of mi faves
keep up the good work