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| simpleplan13 2007-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like this.. its an interesting idea.. well done |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWell, this is more of a sentence than three lines. But, I like it. It's easier to understand the idea in a sentence. Our life's journey, I guess. Good job. Thanks for the review. -C.N |
| Nonya Soum 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. It's more like a sentence than 3 lines supporting a thought, but that's good. I like that because I find it easier to focus on the idea. Very true about a journey. No path is really known until it has been taken in different ways. After all, it's the journey that's the important part, not the destination. I think this haiku might get stuck in my head because it's different from the typical "take 2 steps forward and 1 step back" type thing. Good job! Write on! |