I like this.. its an interesting idea.. well done

Well, this is more of a sentence than three lines. But, I like it. It's easier to understand the idea in a sentence. Our life's journey, I guess. Good job. Thanks for the review.


-C.N

Interesting. It's more like a sentence than 3 lines supporting a thought, but that's good. I like that because I find it easier to focus on the idea.

Very true about a journey. No path is really known until it has been taken in different ways. After all, it's the journey that's the important part, not the destination. I think this haiku might get stuck in my head because it's different from the typical "take 2 steps forward and 1 step back" type thing.

Good job! Write on!