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| lil.miss.sammi 2007-10-25 ch 2,  | abusegreat chapter definitely got me hooked! im going to check out your profile hopefully you have some more stories up UPDATE SOON! |
| frkshlycheerful 2007-10-25 ch 2, | abusewhoa. why would you reedit? its wonderful. |
| Emma 2007-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi lovely. That was fantastic. And I love how you put the two chapters together. Seriously, you are a fantastic writer. You really are and you always have me intrigued. I love Cassidy she can hold her own which I love. She has such a strong personality. Write more soon. |
| sourbabe24 2007-07-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow, Tammy. I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. You have a way with words and I'm so incredible jealous. Two thumbs way, way up. |
| angelfromurnightmare 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abuse:D ryan is HOT! and kinda teasy. i LOVE how your characters are always so believable! lol amoeba :D cassidy has sass. i like :D |
| angelfromurnightmare 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abusereally realistic! especially the pointless weather reports the pilots always give. i like cassidy...sad about her parents >.< somebody shoot rita |
| Emma 2007-07-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think I have a crush on Ryan. Haha. He is a very interesting character Tammy, to say the least. I love Cassidy's personality, she can hold her own around hot guys and that's not something that many girls can do, sadly. But then again that's usually the shallow ones who can't. I love it Tammy, you're a brilliant writer. |
| Emma 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Tammy that was so brillant. Seriously. I've always said that only you have the ability to have me hooked by the first chapter/prologue. Everything was written out so perfectly, I felt as if I was reading a published novel. Amazing Tammy, I don't know what else to say beside the fact that you are definitely one of my favourite online writers. I love you. |
| BoomShaKaLaKaLa 2007-07-04 ch 2, | abusewow, very good! i love your characters, and your dialogues! You did such an amazing work with this :) -*Livia*- |
| *Julie* 2007-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseI LOVE this fic so much! Seriously, it's amazing! I love how you write the descriptions. I see everything in my mind and I love how you put the characters into so many mood swings. Seriously, it's just working out so well and I wanna read MORE and that needs to be done NOW! Love ya loads, *Julie* |
| Matan 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseooh drug cocktails, alcoholics, abuse, abandoned by parents... how twisted is she going to end up. I enjoyed the first chapter, opened up fast to lots of questions and issues and characterization I really admire that, and the part about the flight was quite accurate, always a plus, those clouds are always slightly turbulence provoking. If I was writing this I'd add some section about watching the clouds right as you pass around them and through them, always sparks metaphors in my mind, clouds can be anything as far as literature. She doesn't seem too mad about all these problems in her life, just seems to want to be able to continue her life normally even with that stuff all around her, I'll ponder that. |
| eternaiiyserene 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, so I read it again, this time for content, etc, and I found there are parts of it that are slightly confusing...like the "fixing part"? etc...we should chat online sometime about them...and...yeah... |
| eternaiiyserene 2007-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this chapter...hahahaha, reminds me of some of the things we've talked about...can't wait for the next chapter, *taps foot impatiently*...lol, I hope Ryan's not the jerk he appears as, but I can't change your ideas on the story...keep writing...more more more more more more... |
| Cait :] 2007-07-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseTammy.. I love the exchange between Cassidy and Ryan. She obviously knows how to make him feel less like a man. The best thing I love about their exchange is all the subtextual emotions and actions that you made clear from your various stellar descriptions. I loved this chapter.. more soon please? |
| Bad for Your Skin 2007-07-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseUm...I was looking over it again, and I just found it a little odd that nobody who met her thus far seemed to notice she had a cast on. That, or didn't care all that much that she did. Just thought I'd share. Other than that, keep up the good work ^^ |