I like this alot. it's really good. i hope you do write more.

wow..i loved it. it was beautiful! it's something that happens to everyone..it was so easy to relate. there are a few spelling errors though. thought the last three lines were great.

Kat, Kat, Kat, and you say you can't write? Tsk tsk. Look at what you've just written! It comes from the heart, and this cleary shows what a heart should feel and do. I love it, and you rock.

T.M.L.