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Reviews For: Tranquility

Sparrowriting
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseTouching...I'm not normally one for poetry but that was beautiful. I loved it. (if that doesn't sound too corny, haha)

=)
naioka1992
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abusesweet, sad and honest. i love the way each line rhymes (sp?) at the end. i can't believe anyone could be so rude and uncaring to disturb a cemetary. why the hell do they think there were gods of the dead and such?
anyway, i hope everything goes well for this cemetary. it sounds like a nice place, like a cemetary should be. best of luck with saving such a lovely place,

naioka1992 - xoxo
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