Aw. So Sweet :)

I liked the story but you should have stuck with one point of view. You switched from Riley to Aiden to Riley again. Stay in one head. Like your plot though.

OMG I love this story! Can't wait to read more

nicely done. i love the way its layed out. and keep the name Aiden.

oh they're so cute! good job again!

love it hun! should be shutting down now...more later!

ah... i just love your oneshots... they're amazing! this one was so cute!

~Miss Deelylah Rose

AW.

HOW SWEET!!

i liked that story alot.

nice job!

Such a shame this is only a one shot. I quite like your writing. Since we readers are always reading from the computer screen we don't really want to for too long and so not that much description is great!

Really well written, i loved it!!
Haelo;)