That was truly one of the sweetest poems I have read. Sad, but sweet.

Nicely written. You should be proud of yourself... You a re really talented.

Lisa :)

This is beautiful, doll. I'm sure mum and baby will pull through, just be strong, stay close to your dad and know I'm here.

This is a beautiful poem, and a heartbreaking one. The only correction I would make is in line 17 (starting from the bottom): you used "past" when "passed" in appropriate. Other than that, wonderful.

Keep writing.