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| Jainblu 2008-06-06 ch 3,  | abuseWow, you must be like super organised... you already have the last five chapter done. I don't understand how people do it, I'm a procrastinator by nature. Nominated No. 1 Distracter in my graduating class lool... Really it's that hard to comprehend. Anyhu, your story has had me thoroughly entertained, I also loike how it's making me brush up on my french skills. Can't wait to read more, because I really like the way the story's gone so far. |
| Jainblu 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAugust is my favourite month ^_^ Nice prologue. My interest is piqued. x |
| Ogallybogallyboo 2008-01-09 ch 3, | abuseThis story is HILARIOUS!I love that shes into Egyptology and Archeology and that I can see this story going far, keep up the great work!:) |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-18 ch 3, | abuseThat last sentence was hilarious. Great job! This story is an enjoyable read. Please update soon. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abusePoor Eliot--lost luggage and an unwelcoming housemate. It sounds like this story is going to get very interesting. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseGood start. Poor Eliot. It wouldn't be any fun having a sister who steals all the attention. ;) Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Dani P 2007-07-14 ch 3, | abusegreat chapter can't wait to read more. |
| Dani P 2007-07-14 ch 2, | abusegood chapters so far I like you're writing style you're very talented. however just a thing about airports in different countries the major cities definatly have english translations on like everything. so you may want to keep that in mind. |
| CreativeEdge 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseI like it, alot. theres a really nice subtle flow to this story- one that slowly draws you in rather than dumping the plot on your lab first chapter. I really enjoyed the end of the second chapter, and the beginning of the third, the humor wasn't overly obvious and just ...I dunno added to the charm ? Very well written, i can't wait until the next chapter. -Ani |
| sleepiness 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abusei really like where this is going! aha, i just started learning french and am estatic that i can understand the little phrases you put in! keep it up! ^_^ |
| tornangelwings 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseokay this is the first ive read of it but i absolutly love ita nd i dcantw ait to read more so keep it up. |
| Professional scatterbrain 2007-06-30 ch 2, | abuseSuch an exciting begining. I can't wait to read more. |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-06-28 ch 2, | abusewow you have some great ideas, but the IM thing was kinda confusing, with the little bits of narration in it - it made it really difficult to read because i had to keep switching back and forth anyways, keep it up! xx |
| SatineSukuropio 2007-06-28 ch 2, | abuseThis is such a hidden gem of a story, please update soon! i want to read more! |
| lil.miss.sammi 2007-06-27 ch 2, | abusehey great story.. u can really describe her thoughts and feelings well and i really like that way u translate the french.. well done mate! |