Aah, you did such a great job! ;; So cute, so cute! I love Miss Rose too! ;; She's such a happy, adorable, sweet character! Exclamation marks! I like how she would go around talking to and hugging other plants. Aww. Freckles too. She made me smile and laugh a bunch of times, like in this line: “A small black box! Of course, Mister Derek! Thank you so much!” And the part about Daffy too, aww. x) Eehee. And Derek! What a sweetheart. ;-; He makes your heart all warm and fuzzy-like and totally makes you cry when Miss Rose is gone near the end. I wibbled. If there were more men like him, the world would be a happier place, with a booming flower shop business. He's cute too. Arghahasdjkl; everything is wonderful and fantastic and cute. It would make a neat storybook type thing too. It's excellent, and so are you. Less than fifteen minus twelve! The pacing seems fine to me, and the imagery is lovely without being overwhelming. Eep. Wonderful, wonderful! Thank you~ x) It really is fantastic. Take care, stay nifty, and don't forget to wash behind your ears. Love!