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| The Intelligent Designer 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I enjoyed reading it as instructed |
| sicklysnowwhite 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseit kinda sounds lke he skipped out on her when they were having sex. dirty. i love it though, the style is great and the story is lovely. i wish he didnt leave, but im glad you have his clothes to remember him by. hah. |
| Lavender Dylan 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was a fun poem to read (when read the way it's supposed to be read). Good Job on this. |
| Ashelin 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThe style is pretty interesting. Especially reading it the way you said to. Great job! |