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| Greki 2008-07-03 ch 8,  | abuseThis is a very interesting story. I wonder, though, will you continue it at a later stage? I truly hope so, you left me hooked. |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abusei do not agree with the girl gone boy - i doubt anyone is that idiotic that they cannoy tell the difference. but i like how you built up the story, and i wonder what will happen when tracy finds out dont stop ciao Samantha x |
| someone 2008-06-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseplease write a new chapter soon. |
| Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abuseA girl raised as a boy then forced into marraiage, oh that is fun. You leave it at a cliff hanger so not fun, i hope you continue this story it is really good and intersting, so you should update soon. |
| PT of Awesomeness 2008-04-22 ch 8, | abuseFEED ON MY REVIEW AND UPDATE! >8D Nice story, BTW. Can't wait for their relationship to develop even more. 8D |
| Billy Rose 2008-04-14 ch 8, | abuseoh, awesome so far! ^_^ so can't wait to see how shef inally figures Christ out |
| Omok 2008-02-17 ch 8, | abuseOMG! ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE YOU UP DATED! PLEASE PLEASE! KEEP GOING! T-T! please! |
| Jynx78 2007-10-18 ch 8, | abuseah update update update please please i was reading and all of a sudden there wasnt a forward button i wana know what happens!! please please ~!!~jYNX~!!~ |
| crazychic7278 2007-08-18 ch 8, | abuseyour story is ever good it keeps me wondering and i wonder when does she find out that her husband/wife is a chic? HM |
| Frozensummers 2007-08-07 ch 8, | abuseKudos! I really like your story - good plot, good characters, good grammar - it's almost perfect! :) One thing I'm confused about is how Christ manages to hide her gender - for one, doesn't she have breasts? And from personal experience, it doesn't really make you flat if bind them with bandages! And also, does she go in the mens' room? Cause wouldn't someone notice if she's always in a stall? But, all little detail-faults aside, you've got a really magnificent story going :D |
| LesbianAce 2007-08-06 ch 8, | abuseEEP! update soon! lol loveing this so far...poor Christ, getting his breasts groped...if that made sense lol |
| DiscoloredEyes 2007-08-06 ch 8, | abuseOh it gets better every chapter!... Good chapter can't wait for your next update! XD |
| The Toothpaste Fiend 2007-08-05 ch 2, | abuseGreat story idea! Really original. Well, it's kind of your usual thing with a twist. I love sotries like that! :) |
| Indirect Object 2007-08-05 ch 8, | abuseThis is great, I love it! I can't wait for more. |
| Jessica Pryce 2007-08-05 ch 8, | abuseYou need to work on your use of pronouns. When you are in Tracy's point of view, Christ should be male all the time (and not "the short haired woman") since Tracy doesn't know yet that Christ is female, and when we're looking at things from Christ's POV, she should always be female. Also, you keep switching POVS on us without warning or separation. If we're going to be seeing things through Christ's eyes, it should be *only* Christ's eyes, not Tracy's in the next sentence. |