GREAT!

This was a very powerful chapter. Very funny, too! I rather like this Aeleisa character. She's sure of herself, but not to the point of selfishness, and she challenges authority. I'm enjoying this story a lot! :)

I know you've already finished this story and have most likely moved on to other ideas, but it still intrigues me. I'm going to have to read it now. Expect bunches of reviews. ;)

What the hell was that? That was a really cruel way to end a book. I mean, jeez. I was really loving it until I found the author's note that said it was done. BTW, believe it or not, my eyes actually tore up a little. Still loving it though. On to book #2.

man, im already hooked, and its only the prologue! good stuff ^^
i think what really pushed me over the edge was the last line, as they say 'leave them wanting more' right? ad that line certainly did

aww, congrats on finishing and good luck with book two!

this chapter was SO sweet! what a kind letter he wrote her, seriously. well, I'm sad they didn't get to see each other... they will meet again, right?

oh no! this is sad, I can't believe roane is being sent away. eep.

aww, dancing is so cute! I love maryn... I know she should be with roane and all but I wonder who he will end up with? hmm...

aww, this chapter was good. I am really afraid of what haemon might do, though.

lol, gisela is such a weirdo. and yeah, I like how this story is getting very interesting... wonder what's really going on, though I've started to piece some things together.

aw, they are way too cute :) I wonder if they'll fall in love and then later break it off, however?

Awesome story! ^_^

Why does Roane remind me of ProtoMan...? O_o

I have to tell you at first when I found out you were stopping the story to rewriting it I was rather grumpy cause it was at a clifhanger part. But i have to say that after finally getting around to reading the rewriten story it is awesome! I like how you make the prince good in this story vs bad. And you gave us more background into what happend during the war. Yay for you writing another book. I hope that you will explain more on how the comandar of the past became a trator to the king and where her parents where from and what happen to the chosen, and lots more. Good job and keep up the good work. Hopefully ill get more time to read your next story soon.

but then again the princes are similar too [their names] D: