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RyanMan13 2008-11-28 ch 4,	Awesome story! ^_^ Why does Roane remind me of ProtoMan...? O_o
clair-a-net 2008-11-25 ch 32,	I have to tell you at first when I found out you were stopping the story to rewriting it I was rather grumpy cause it was at a clifhanger part. But i have to say that after finally getting around to reading the rewriten story it is awesome! I like how you make the prince good in this story vs bad. And you gave us more background into what happend during the war. Yay for you writing another book. I hope that you will explain more on how the comandar of the past became a trator to the king and where her parents where from and what happen to the chosen, and lots more. Good job and keep up the good work. Hopefully ill get more time to read your next story soon.
ZXc 2008-11-14 ch 1,	but then again the princes are similar too [their names] D:
asdf 2008-11-14 ch 28,	y'know... this kinda reminds me of "the queen of glass" ... aelin, aeleisa but still it's probably original (: love it
summers-end 2008-11-12 ch 32,	Aah! So excited about the second story! Please write more! summers-end
RighTOuttALaLa.LaNd 2008-10-27 ch 32,	you know? i've NEVER written a review ( i know, i'm bad **) but i mean, your story is by far, one of the best i've had the pleasure reading! you are one amazing writer. its riduclas how much i cried at the end ( almost as hard as i did when Dumbeldore died...almost) but please start the next book...asap its kiling me... Its a great series
MissMei92 2008-10-24 ch 32,	Oh my gosh. I literally did cry my heart out at the ending. :'( I don't know why... I just felt everything going on, and when I read the letter Roane left, the tears just came. I nearly flipped a joint when you said that was the end (I thought you wouldn't continue the story) but yay! Now I'm waiting for the next one. :D
Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-10-16 ch 3,	hiya i just knew that Aeleisa would be chosen to go. But i sort of get a hint that Roane has an interest in that isn't only about having to take 5 girls and 5 boys. Could it be a interest in here that is sexual?? great chapter... can't wait to read more. I think i am going to up most of the night reading this story :) angel
Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-10-16 ch 1,	hiya wow - great opening. I love the way the scene of your story is shown in the prologue. Great writing. I can't wait to read your story. Angel
Written 2008-10-15 ch 24,	haha. Oh DEAR. Well, I'm sure she'll come around eventually. good chapter!
Written 2008-10-15 ch 23,	aww this is so cute! they SO have to be together. how do you write such adorable things?
Written 2008-10-15 ch 22,	seriously, why didnt anyone wonder about this before? haha. like, where do the chosen disappear to? anyway. good chapter. nice to see helonce again. and he knows that kael is hayden now, so thats good too, I suppose. roane is such a great guy.
Written 2008-10-15 ch 21,	stupid lady gisela. I hope the prince finds a NORMAL girl. that would be nice. and yay, going to helonce!
Written 2008-10-15 ch 20,	poor maryn! his life is way more exciting than mine, for what its worth. liked the ball and dancing and stuff. it was way cute. and yes, telling people you practiced in your underwear would be a mite shameful.
Written 2008-10-15 ch 19,	poor maryn, being forced to marry and all. roane and our heroine are coming along well. liked the quip about them being married and them being all awkward afterwards. what I really wonder about is what the purpose of the chosen really is. I mean... what is it?

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