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| concerto49 2007-08-22 ch 1,   | Gun shots give you this eerie ring and it just goes bang. Hm It's full of uncertainty and passiveness - I think, I hear, and all. Perhaps it's because the narrator's scared and senseless? Sure is devastating. Anyhow. Cheers. |