So far so good, I like your writing style and I'm glad to see you're someone who either proofreads or uses spellcheck. (Thats a pet peeve of mine!) I like the idea of your story, so that'll keep me coming back. But another reason I'll have to keep reading is because one of my best friends is named Tessa, with green eyes and "average" brown hair, as well as pale skin. Can't help but think of your Tessa as my Tessa. So keep up the good work and I'll be back!

Hmm... this is good so far, I'll be keeping my eye on it.

wow that was a really good start i can't wait for more, i like it so far.i guess you could say i am intrigued.

I like it so far. Hope to see another chapter soon.

wow! what abrillent start. keep writting.

Finaly been bothered.~erAced~