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| Lynn-Night 2008-04-15 ch 17,  | abuseGood job! Please update as soon as possible! |
| Lynn-Night 2007-11-07 ch 16, | abuseAwesome! I love it, except for the fact that it is really short. Haha oh well, update real soon though! It's getting intense! Love it! |
| Lynn-Night 2007-10-11 ch 15, | abuseawesome! Awesome! AWESOME! Haha o this is so good! Please update real soon and I don't care if the chapters are short, they're good, so that's all that matters! haha love it! Update!! |
| Nicole Deming 2007-10-10 ch 15, | abuseI like this story I hope you update soon. |
| beckie 2007-08-01 ch 13, anon. | abusei love this book bring on the chapters! |
| Dragonette12 2007-07-13 ch 13, | abusehey this whole story is great! i can't wait until we find out who she is ! update soon ^^ |
| Yellers 2007-07-12 ch 13, | abuseCome on people review i want to find out who she is please update soon |
| Yellers 2007-07-10 ch 12, | abuseAw that's so cute i really like this chapter a little short but still great i hope sherri AKA momma s (haha to jack at least) will react in a good way toward addy and Aaron liking each other ok well please update as soon as possible thanks so much :-) |
| powerranger 2007-07-09 ch 11, | abuseI love this story. It's not rushed or anything, though I think you could do a better job at describing the scenes. Sometimes it randomly skips and stuff. But for the most part, it's real good! Keep writing! :D |
| Yellers 2007-07-07 ch 10, | abuseThat's so sweet that he cares for her so much cliff hangar gosh right when there about to kiss lol I love your writing can't wait to see what happens next:-) |
| Yellers 2007-07-04 ch 9, | abuseaw poor Aaron that was cute she can tell when he lies and they were holding hands aw please update when you get the chance can't wait :-) |
| Yellers 2007-07-03 ch 8, | abuseuh-oh trouble yes i definetly liked it please update as soon as possible thanks |
| Yellers 2007-06-30 ch 7, | abuseAddy and Aaron are so cute anyways great story update as soon as possible |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-06-27 ch 5, | abusenew reader...i like this story... i cant wait to see what happens next hope you update soon |
| Lavender L. C 2007-06-25 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting. Nice flow, wasn't rushed. I liked it. I wonder where Abby is from. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. Good job. |