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| Hannah Montana 2008-02-05 ch 23,  | abuseI kinda liked the ending I didn't think it would be so harsh. And now I won't have anything to look forward to! You finished both your storys! |
| Daydream Nation 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was funny :) Especially the caps. |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-02-02 ch 22, | abuseoh, that was sad!...but in a sweet way... i like it! are you going to post anything else? |
| JadeDream 2008-02-02 ch 22, | abusei just read this all the way through. awesome story but why not a happy ending?! oh well...i guess ill just have to choose to believe that the locket was his heart or something and that theyre together. but it was a great! |
| xLoveAddictx 2008-01-05 ch 21, | abuseI'd have to admit...I'd love it if they had a happy ending. :) but anyway lovely chapter! Update soon! |
| sardoincRuNt 2007-12-05 ch 21, | abuseerr... A) Happy ending...pretty please with sugar on top? |
| Carmel March 2007-12-05 ch 21, | abuseThat was amazingly amazing. Even though it's been awhile since I've set eyes on this story, I immediately got right back into it the moment I started reading. This story keeps getting deeper and even more interesting. Keep up this wonderful work, and I'm looking forward to reading more :) ~Carm~ |
| Hannah Montana 2007-12-05 ch 21, | abuseYou right the story I'll read it. You made a mistake when you wrote the party was lover, instead of over. |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-12-04 ch 21, | abuseuh...i'm leaning to either a or c. no sad ending |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-11-25 ch 20, | abuseeh...sorry im late! great story! i like neptune in a weird untrusting way. don't ask, i don't get it either, but i like him that way. i don't like venus at all, stupid slutty ** xP jupiter is getting on my nevers. the idiot. oh and murcurey and mars...i think they should go jump off a brigde (metephorically speaking of course) and leave the world in peace...but then every other god would have to go too...well nemptune could stay cuz he's cool...but yeah i'm rambling so i'll stop... |
| Carmel March 2007-11-11 ch 20, | abuseI'm here, I'm here! I'm still alive! Sorry I took so long to read and review! Time is an issue these days. Really wonderful job you're doing, as always. I was so glad to see an update in my inbox. So, keep up this superamazingness. I can't wait to read more :) ~Carm~ |
| aiveecrystal 2007-11-09 ch 20, | abusehey i like it very much. hope to know what will happen soon. tc |
| Hannah Montana 2007-10-29 ch 20, | abuseI was so exited when I saw Neptue's girl on my e-mail. And Ihad to read it right away. |
| A Flying Pandorama 2007-10-28 ch 20, | abuseGreat story! I've been following it avidly... but one thing... If your not going to update often- write more! The readers will soon lose disinterest if you don't look committed, you know what I mean? In any case, this is so exciting! so close to the end and witht he trident still a mystery... oh I'm excited! |
| Carmel March 2007-10-06 ch 19, | abuseSorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :) I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them. I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;) ~Carm~ |