I love the Jesus/God symbolism. Very good work. :)

This is beautifully written, definitely something from a good storyteller (short and sweet). Keep it up!

WOW!! that is amazing...

I would say...bad choice for the father.

I'm not a Christian myself, but this was beautifully written. I especially loved the way you related it to people today, promising some form of salvation at the end. Good work; I hope to see more from you! :)
-Cristina