Are you serious?!
Haha, I loved this. WHen you dumb it down like this, the story DOES seem sort of simple. Hehe. I loved all the recipe. I'm going to try it soon. This approach sort of makes the story seem comical. Oh, you forgot the second bully ould have purple lemon shavings. Hehe

Aws, I found this fic in a C2 and I wanted to read it :(

Good luck with your publishing! If one day you do end up putting this story back up, drop a note because I'd love to read it! :)

Oh man. I was curious about Dimitri after reading your other story.I hope everything goes good with the publishing.

I so wanted to read this. You could leave it here until you get it published, couldn't you? I mean, there's a lot of people who wants to read it, and I'm pretty sure it alone means a lot to any writer. I understand that you'll have to remove it when it's published, but for now I wanted so so much to read it.

Well, I'm pretty sure you won't post it again, but at least I tried. It'll probably be difficult to me to buy the book because I'm pretty sure it won't be published in my country anytime soon, if ever. So... sad puppy eyes.

By and good luck to publish it (:
xoxo

Oh man! Come on! I really want to read it! Really bad! Please? Like, really bad. All your reviews make it seem like it would be an amazing read. Please post it so I can read it! Please?

Ash

i really miss reading this story...i really wish you'd put it up again so some of us can have the pleasure of reading it again, but i guess if you're in the midst of having it published that wouldn't be such a good idea. how's the publishing coming by the way?

I hope you 'DONT' fail! It'd be better if it were in a book.

Good luck!

well i hope you do get it published...i know how that goes, i have a few stories of my own that i hope will too one day get published...

I totally support you on trying to publish your story. But I was hoping that if you are unsuccessful that you would post it here on again. I really want to be able to read it since I haven't yet.

WORD! YODA!

BUT WHO!! will TRY to support!

Better succeed.

AW BLOODY FRICKEN HELL! WAH WHY OH WHY DID U HAVTA DO THT?! SNIFF JUST WEN I COME ACROSS IT ALL EXCITED ITS GONE! KABOOSH! SIGH

BUT HEY GUD LUCK ON PUBLISHING IT,...i suppose. :(

I am super sad that you took this down, I understand the reasoning, but it doesn't make me any happier... *cries* I came back to look and see if Beau's last name was Ahern as i was reading you latest update of Identity... oh well. I hope you publish it as it was a truly excellent piece of literature.

Hey Kyou, was just wondering what the significance, if any, there is to the name of Murphy? Just doing random research trying to motivate me into studying for exams now.

Haha, I hope this gets published. I just finished reading all of the chapter of Identity you have out and I really enjoy it. I will def buy this if it comes out.