Hi. Me again. Again, a very good poem, some of the best I have read recently. There are only a few thing I would change on this one, all of them formatting. I would split the following lines"

But had tragically lost and could never own again
to
But had tragically lost
and could never own again

How is it that you fall into my lap
to
How is it
that you fall into my lap

That four-letter word that I have always known
to
That four letter word
that I have always known

For you and only you - forever?
to
For you and only you
forever?

Through thick and thin and good and bad
to
Through thick and than
and good and bad

It may seem like a lot, but it really isn't. I think these changes would help with the tone of the piece and it's flow.

Again, I hope these comments have helped. And again, thank you. I have been lacking good poetry to read for a while.

aw i love it!! and it's so true!!

Good job. You've written a good poem, but that's just it. It's good. It's very smoothe and well rounded, but the vocabulary is very limited and there's no rhyming. I want to see how you improve because it's evident that you have a gift for writing. Keep going and work ** getting better. Good job.

i liked your wording. & the repetition in the poem.
altogether, great job.