I was wondering when you're going to update?

This seems really interesting. Hope you update soon!

Hm interesting. The composition of the two characters Melody and Trevor is pretty original. You rarely see a bodyguard type guy without some hot young thing under the age of 18 attaching herself to his arm. Characterisation is pretty good. In the next chapter will there be an explanation on Mr Greene's sudden transformation, and Trevor and Meolody's calm reaction to it. I can see Trevor's a bit suprised and confused, but i wonder why he didn't immedietly shoot the man in the eye when he started growing claws and growling? And why didn't Melody, a girl of nine, start crying in a corner? There's mature and then there's freakily familiar with the supernatural. Anyway, good work! (You might want to edit the last paragraph slightly - there should be a new paragraph when Melody starts speaking (it's sort of halfway there though.)