i loved how he jumped. i would SO try that. it was be amazingly fun. i think it was cute and well thought out. but i got confused a little bit. i thought at: "Like seeing your brother’s best friend, who tagged along, making out with a random island girl a couple house after you accidentally let it spill that you like him." meant him as the island girl. which didn't make sense. because a girl is not a him. BUT NOW I GET IT.

very well done.
later gater.

I never actually got how a story could be "Drama/Humor" but now i do! That was really good! Gosh, you are a really talented author! Bravo! Bravo!