very vivid imagery and ideas. good job

keep writing

The title seem to fit this though. Not sure about it myself, but only cause I'm not sure if I should be reading this right now with this emotion stuck to me. Ruins the impact and effect the poem soughts out to the reader. I like how this seemed to rhyme when you read this out loud. And it reaches out, but maybe because I would think that right now. But wonderful job on this poem. If it just flows, it's for a purpose and maybe an awesome one at that. Overall, great. Keep it up, as usual. ^^