Wow, that was disturbing. I liked it, but that was shiver inducing. And i thought I had a morbid imagination. Keep up the writing, its very good.

Woah, powerful poem
the way the word deeper is repeated makes me shiver.
i enjoyed this and will proably read it again

Keep wrighting!

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Blueberry-Butterfly

Great. sick & completly twistd but good short dscribtive writing.

Really good!
It's pretty gross, but I like gross.
I like how it's a FEMALE serial killer. Whenever there's a TV show or movie with a serial killer, it's always a guy that goes arter young women. But here, it's a woman who goes after big, tough guys. I like the reversal.