 Melissa Norvell 2007-06-28 . chapter 1*adds to alerts and faves* This is a wonderful work! I'll definitely be reading this story in the future when you update. Wonderful plot build up, good characterization and over-all a good work. It deserves more reviews.
I really like Florian a lot. I can't wait to see another chapter.
Perhaps if you get the time, you could read some of my works. I need to edit some of them, but I'm slowly getting around to it. They are still very good stories, however.
Well, good luck on this wonderful peice of work. You definitely have potential. |