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| muse d'amour 2007-07-10 ch 5,  | abusehmm, I didn't see Julio mentioned earlier in the story...I'll have to double check that... Bee Tee Double Yeww, you are now on my fave authors list =] |
| muse d'amour 2007-07-10 ch 4, | abusem, sexy spanish boy =P No, actually I really like this- it sounds very poetic, and it has some really great imagery. |
| Johnathen Braun 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI like dthe initial description but I think it needs more action. Like, for instance, how does she meet this friend at the airport. Maybe you should start the story at the airport. I like the set-up about how the girl wants a boyfriend though. |