A timed meeting like that only appeared like chance, as it was obviously meant to be. Science or no, if the person you were meant to be held by and vice versa meets you in a place as unlikely as this it had to been fated to happen. But this is from a slightly clouded perspective so ya. Buh bye.

I like how the poem is ordered. It's almost like your going from what your saying to what you are actually thinking. It's brilliant! However (yeah there is an however) the last part of the poem doesn't make sense, particularly the last line (I'm just that that it's with you it's sharing) maybe it was supposed to go something like this (It's just that... that it's with you that I'm sharing). Maybe, just guessing. Otherwise, I really like this poem. I would call this a unique love poem, because what your saying actually contrasts the thoughts of the poem. Genius I tell you, genius!

i like the poem it was pretty good
was that a stab at me
in the more than science?
and
did you get thetitle from metallica

That is an interesting rhyme scheme. I liked it though. "feeling" and "sharing" don't really rhyme, but it's ok. It was good. Keep it up.