Reviews for The Princess and the Puck

Reviews For: The Princess and the Puck

FreedomStar 2007-09-09 ch 12,	abuseWow, I don't think the Recorder has ever spoken so much. That was a very nice monologue for her; it's the first time she's ever showed any emotion at all. I really like how she's working out as the narrator and she is working herself into the story. It's different and it's just an interesting way to follow a story. :)
FreedomStar 2007-09-01 ch 11,	abuseThis is going to be short (I guess no shorter than usual) and I'm sorry but I skimmed through parts of it so I'll have to re-read later. I am really enjoying all of these little bits Adair. I can already see the romance sparking. And I will say this again, I love the Recorder. She is awesome. Can she 'take over' people too? So far it's only been animals. Sorry for the crappy review.
FreedomStar 2007-08-23 ch 10,	abuse:D Duly noted. I guess timelines are quite difficult to keep track of. Now, while I love Elmira, I like that we got an entire chapter focusing mostly on Adair and Puck. It's nice to get 'inside' their heads for a bit, even if it is just one chapter.
FreedomStar 2007-07-29 ch 8,	abuseIt took me ages to read this because my mom kept talking to me as I was trying to read. It took awhile, but I did get through the chapter. I was away at college orientation, and had no idea that the hotel I stayed at offered free internet. Go figure. So today was the first chance I got to check my e-mail. It's nice to see several updates, especially this story. The story is progressing nicely, but I'm a little bit confused about the timeline. Elmira was a thief until she was 16. She was 16 when Puck found her and brought her to get some training or whatever it's called. now shes 17, but when she caught that kid trying to steal from her her thought was something like 'two years of meals and exercise', which mean's she's 18 at the time she goes to see the thief king. So does that mean another year has passed?
FreedomStar 2007-07-22 ch 7,	abuseInteresting, I didn't think the two knight's would play any real part in this story. They're like chess pieces, all part of a strategic game. Sorry this is so short, but I can't really think of much to say. Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows has taken up most of the space in my mind reserved for thinking.
FreedomStar 2007-07-18 ch 6,	abuseI didn't review the last ch b/c I was away on vacation :) Disneyland was calling...anyways, as usual, good chapters, although I'm wondering about the purpose the two 'knights' will serve as they don't seem to add much to the storyline aside from keeping Puck and Adair on their toes.
FreedomStar 2007-07-12 ch 4,	abuseI really like the Recorder. There's something quite endearing about her, how she records everyone's life and how she is a part of it all. Things are moving forward, which is good. I'm curious as to when the two storylines will meet up; it should be quite an interesting read. :)
FreedomStar 2007-07-11 ch 3,	abuseOk. So I -think- I kinda understand the whole Recorder-different worlds-situation. They are recorders for each others world, recording from their own world. Are they writers? Ooh, and is this an urban fantasy? Or..hm. Yeah, still a bit confuzzled, but I am seriously enjoying this story.
FreedomStar 2007-07-05 ch 2,	abuseThis is going in an interesting direction. It's a bit confusing with the Recorder talking to more than one person, because they're all referred to as 'him'. That's the only problem I have with it. And there are confusing parts that I hope will be explained further on. :) Hope you had a Happy Fourth.

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