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Reviews For: It Would Have Been Ascension

Lemon Sparrow
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. It's poetic and pretty, and you have some wholly original lines in there, things that don't really happen but make sense nonetheless. And the idea behind it brilliant, really - you've gotten very deep here. A favourite.
Ashelin
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseSomething about this horrifies me. I'm not quite sure what it is. Not the way it was written, but something behind the words. Like there is a secret I can barely grasp...Good job.
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