*swoons* that was just too damn beautiful. keep it up!

~RD

OH MY GOD that was gorgeous. I mean.. maybe a little fluffy.. but I kind of adore fluff. Don't look at me like that. =D

I do have to say I disagree with Molly about the word **, but other than that, this is fantastic. =)

amazingly beautiful
i love the imagery and choice of words
and you don't even need more chapters to get a feel of understanding of the characters

this is why i trust a story to be good even if the summary isn't ^.^

:D Cute. Fluffy.

I liked it.

This is pretty good. You have some issues with run-ons at the beginning, but otherwise it's stylistically quite good. The main issue I have is that it's pretty cliché; no offense, but I feel as if I've read the ending many times before. The language is fairly good but the way it ends bothers me a bit.

Perhaps only due to my current extremely emotional state - then again perhaps not - your story actually made me cry. *Laughs* Trust me, and it takes a very, very well written story of the non-angst variety to make me cry.

Erm... what I'm trying to say is well done, for writing such a beautiful (admittedly a little cliche) one shot. :c) Thank you for placing this little piece of wonderfulness into my day.

-Jazz.