brilliant and very philosophical! Great imagery and a nice view point on that never tiring beast we call time

I think that the bold, italics, and underlining distracts from the poem a lot. I read it a second time and tried to ignore them and the poem felt much better in my mind than it had when I had paid attention the blaring bold/italics/underlining.

I love your philosophy that comes out in this, and also love the word choices that you ... choose (wow). I really like the last lines, and also like the small rhymes that can be found embedded in the lines.

Very nice poem. You have a skill with words. :) I liked this one better than the Dear, But Never Close poem. This one seemed to be clearer in what it was saying.

-Jesse
Beware the review marathon! (link in my profile)

True, and witty.

Keep the poems rolling.

Arigoto and good luck

Ah, time. What a ubiquitous but under-appreciated subject. Lovely little musing. I especially like the surprise- rhyme in the second and third lines of "trick" and "tick."