Reviews for Waves of Eternity

snakespirit 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is very stunning. I'm at a loss of words. Honestly, I'm afraid of critiquing your writing since it appears to be that you are writing in order to remember. But if you're interested in improving your writing, here's all I have to say: this is casual, it seems like you're talking to me and not writing. For example, "We'd" should be "We had".
CarlyJo 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseWow. I am so sorry that something like that happened. It was great that you shared it. You have so much emotion on such a small piece. I;m actually crying and it didn't happen to me.