I'm sorry! I thought this story had more reviews than it did, so I didn't review. I'm more of less a lurker, so I mainly only review if I have something to say, or if the story is lacking in reviews and I like it. Really, I didn't notice this story had only one review.

I like this story quite a bit, but I have one suggestion to make. Could you put markers to show the story is switching from on point of veiw to the other? It gets rather confusing without them. But, other wise, this story is very well written in my opinion, and I hope you continue with the good work you are doing on this story!

~~LD

I'm a little confused at how you write and describe stuff, but the overall story seems good