hey. I really enjoyed the second chapter. The background story for Jera was good but it made me sad, and all the detail you've put into the characters is wonderful. I can't wait to read more :D.

Interesting.

The discussion with Chael certainly clears things up, and Jera's position in Arella's life is much more defined now. Some doors closed, while others are opened. Nice hook with the Demon.

Should be pretty interesting.

Jera is awesome, and so is Lito. Jera reminds me very much of Asuka from Neon Genesis Evangelion, though I'm certain she'll distinguish herself from that in the future.

Lito... Lito's got two settings, it would seem: Hyperactive Six-Year-Old, and Not There Bothering You. Of course, that's part of his charm, and it certainly suits for beings whose sole job is to poof around the world delivering messages.

Well, I'm looking forward to more, especially with Gabriel. Time to join you in watching Walking Tall.

Hey just finished reading. I'm glad you decided to keep going :D. I enjoyed this first chapter, the frustration was worth it :D:D. Kepp it going and I'll keep reading. Bye for now.